Friday, 19 April 2013

Mid-Semester Crit

Drawings
 
Collages


Sectional model development

Thoughts and feedback from crit
  • Being able to see the meadow upon entrance is positive
  • Supernatural- recreating this cliff and natural form and then populating it with this meadow. It doesn’t feel entirely like a building…
  • Could be landscape architecture
  • The building could have been there for hundreds of years- it’s not a ruin in a negative way, it’s a sort of repopulated ruin of a previous era…
  • Materiality- concrete works really well
  • Shape of the roof form still needs work
  • Greenhouse: needs structure, not wireframe- looks like the plant room on an elevator shaft- a plain white kit set greenhouse- why not make the glass of the greenhouse that shape- the meadow flows into the greenhouse
  • A found shape that has then been occupied
  • Greenhouse- roof form suggests a grotto or a cave
  • Greenhouse: a shed on the top- need another one of volcanoes- a long pitch on one side
  • Feathering out of floorboards into meadow- look at a detail for that- a detail to go with the collage
  • Planting plan
  • The new ideal of what people think housing is going to be- everyones got this idea of density is the key- a concrete jungle. I'm saying I'm going to be introducing more density but it’s not going to be tower blocks, it’s going to be lush and green and colourful.

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